Monday, May 24, 2010

Amended Narrative

After reassessing my narrative, redrafting and editing, I devised an amended version, that is,
For years she had charmed herself with a beautiful lie, til then at last through a twist of fate, Trea Harvey finally turned to the comfort of an unfamiliar siren's nest; the one that gave her the support to see life through a new light.
In this version of the narrative (relative to the painting), Trea lives her simple life as a normal girl should, believe in a black and white world. But as easy and perfect her life appears, she still feels incomplete. It is when she finds comfort in her relationship with her friend and opens up to a world beyond her religious dialectics that she finds out who she really is under her skin. Through this relationship, she is also then subsequently opened to a world of new challenges and opportunities.

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